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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
A look, a wink The weight of anticipation As it tugs on my heart Irresistably drawn I follow where you go I gulp for air But find no relief From the mounting preasure in my chest So close now I can smell you Sweet mellon and cool cucumber Your touch races through me Like Lightning to the thunder of my heart So slowly we come together Exploring the feel of one another The warmth, the softness You open yourself to me And I pour myself out Your voice Soothing and encouraging The preasure held inside so long Boils to the surface Spilling out uncontrolled With an accompaniment of tears Such release, I've waited for so long I rest now, spent Enveloped within you Naked But no longer alone. "No one knows what its like, |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
I like this. The ending lines were powerful in that one word line "naked", and "but no longer alone". |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
this is an incredibly beautiful and passionate poem. Every word increases the power of feeling here and I am so glad I got to read this. Your poetry is inspirational ! thanks for sharing. hugs from June x ps, these words are just fantastic: You open yourself to me And I pour myself out Your voice Soothing and encouraging The preasure held inside so long Boils to the surface Spilling out uncontrolled With an accompaniment of tears Such release, I've waited for so long I rest now, spent Enveloped within you Naked But no longer alone. |
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