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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2004-05-30 04:02 PM



It happens only at night.
Cloaked in the perfume of quiet dreams
I surrender to the celestial flight
of loving you.
Speak softly my dear
and I'll care not if I ever return
to realities burn.




© Copyright 2004 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
Beasley
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1 posted 2004-05-30 05:05 PM


This is lovely!
Barb

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2 posted 2004-05-30 06:25 PM


Deb:  A beautiful poem and I enjoyed reading it.

Betty Lou

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3 posted 2004-05-31 09:22 AM


Lovely words.  Joyce
midnightblues
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4 posted 2004-06-01 03:05 AM


sweet

Love
MiCheLLe

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Street Heart
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5 posted 2004-06-01 01:19 PM


Three sentences that speak a beautiful mouthful.Passionate dreams...very rare for me,and I enjoyed the short-but-sweet excursion you took me on.

Street Heart

If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

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6 posted 2004-06-03 11:22 AM


SweetSweetBloomingRose~
This is just so very lovely, soft and tender is the surrender~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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PatAngel
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7 posted 2004-06-27 12:10 PM


Deb,

What sweet and lovely words!

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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