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IndigoEve
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Etched in the illusion of time

0 posted 2004-04-20 09:01 PM


{inspired and dedicated}

And on that note,
we cue the music to devour our
senses watching twilights of Tchaikovsky bleed
into auroral designs blessed by 9th symphony stain
on horizon's deliberate intertwine, feel the pastiche
of thickly blue concerto melting through scarlet
etude in delicate, definitive, decisively deviant
precise desolation by glorious time.


If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

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Street Heart
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1 posted 2004-06-01 02:29 PM


WOW! Talk about "word candy"!...and to top it all off,nutricious too! Gorgeous! The style is uniquely your own.I loved the alliteration of "delicate, definitive, decisively deviant precise desolation by glorious time.",and your references to music.Your word images are like a dream. More!

A fan,Street Heart

If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2004-06-01 03:13 PM


Aptly named.  Joyce
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3 posted 2004-06-02 03:03 AM


enjoyed
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2004-06-03 11:24 AM


IndigoEve~
Always a 'Beauty' from your inking well~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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PatAngel
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5 posted 2004-06-27 12:12 PM


IndigoEve,

This is great! What a wonderful read!

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

midnightblues
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6 posted 2004-06-27 10:31 AM


I love the surreal imagery

Love
MiCheLLe

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