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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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The coming misty morns of summers fading into fall, bring a magic of their own. Pungent earthy aroma of sweet rose petals, and green shady leaves... sigh a last breath. A death full of promise, as a fulfillment of Spring. A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is wonderful. To every season its due. Joyce |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'm a big fan of your writing, this is one reason why... It appears as though you buried something deep within this piece that is peeking out, but is hard to identify. I have some confusion here as to whether you are creating a metaphor for death in the form of autumn, a metaphor for autumn in the form of death, or just drawing a comparison... or maybe I'm way, way off... LOL  Either way, the image here was vivid - you have a talent for imagery, in your poetry I always feel the colours come alive. Keep up the wonderful work. Your faithful fan, ~Allan You eat the brains of an old, wise man. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely, Ellie! Very nice! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Your poems are always uplifting and full of wisdom. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Ellie, wow.. its like you took our preacher's sermon and put it in condensed poetic form. So much meaning in so few lines. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
I love to walk in newly plowed fields in spring just to smell the soil.It is a smell of the rebirth from winter.Good write. paladin |
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