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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2004-05-15 11:35 AM


smiles

kisses in moonlight
intoxicating, sweet, stolen wine.
fresh breeze of passion
nightingale says, “you’re mine”

breath catching moments
necking over at lover’s lane.
deep rumble of motorcycle
she says, “driving me insane”

screams like carnival
hilltops below as we soar.
racing the desert moonlight
he says,“hold on, there’s more”

kissing beneath milky way
breath mingled for awhile.
date one never wants to end
God says, “good to see you smile”


~~~~~~


© Copyright 2004 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-05-15 04:40 PM


Daniel~
Cute !  Cute !  Cute !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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2 posted 2004-05-15 06:38 PM


"God says, “good to see you smile”"

Yes He does...
I love this piece!!  Therefore I'm keeping it.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2004-05-15 07:43 PM


Happy, happy.  Made me feel good.  Love, Joyce
passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-05-16 04:27 AM


a feel-good write
BloomingRose
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5 posted 2004-05-16 09:15 AM


Nice romance, as well as a bit intriguing.

Deb

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6 posted 2004-05-16 11:10 AM


Wow, great! sweet

Love
MiCheLLe

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PatAngel
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7 posted 2004-05-16 01:32 PM


Wow, this is so sweet! Great imagery!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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