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IndigoEve
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since 2003-01-10
Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

0 posted 2004-05-14 04:52 PM



The sky is only alive when you are at my feet,
on your delicate knees, breathing me in
like a cello's weeping cries
for freedom or
the heat of friction contained bottomless skin upon
a nameless entity
my hands, our voices
mixturesofheaven tasting flour pour vous instead
of salt and vinegar
do you not remember tha flavor of spicing
thyme before the interim
or is it too long removed,
my eyes from within your shallow motions
a rhythm filled song, we twine the impossibilities into
everyday existence and live according
to a rising sun, bleeding red and silver urgently
or is it soon
until the essence of human is imprinted in you
me
the ground, dirt, lover
begging midst flagrance, indecently
I see callous in your fingers, your touch
scars and scalds my shell
my face, my enigma
you bruise the beauty of all things
with ease and fragility
oxymoronic ardorous incompetent
indecisively handing me words on a spool of green
spreading seasons in an Oriental rug at
Aurora's twilight
somehow, my knees are imperfect to this earth
and the heavens fail, calling you down
away from the inquisitive nature of our feet.

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2004-05-16 04:31 AM


nicely done! I like the feeling this has to it!
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
2 posted 2004-05-16 11:09 AM


i like it!

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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