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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2004-04-20 02:32 PM


The Secret

It took a sharper eye than mine
To find her hiding there.
My eight year old great-grandson
Had just the perfect pair.
He watched her bringing in a worm
Or perhaps that was her mate.
He dropped a ball to search for her
His curiosity to sate.

Her precious little secret is
No secret any more;
Revealed in old camellia
Right there by my front door.
The overhanging branches
Shield her from seeking hawk.
Branches below to weak to hold
Conniving beasts who stalk.

I think she still is sitting on
Her hoard of pregnant clutch.
My comings and my goings don't
Disturb her overmuch.
For the first time in many years
My yard is free of cats.
If a feral dares to come around,
My dog sees that it scats.

I'm hoping to be on the scene
To hear that first small peep.
I'll offer to babysit a bit
To let her have some sleep.
I will see from my big window
Those little heads a bobbin'.
Like Marge, I'll name them for my friends;
With consent of Mother Robin.

By: Joyce 4/20/04

© Copyright 2004 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Beasley
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1 posted 2004-04-20 03:14 PM


This is too too cool! I love it!
Barb

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2 posted 2004-04-20 03:32 PM


Dear Joyce:

First Marge with a clutch of chicks and now you! I'm jealous!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

pictureme
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3 posted 2004-04-21 11:53 PM


This was too cute and it made me smile!
Thanks for sharing this.
pictureme :-)

Isobel
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4 posted 2004-04-22 09:22 AM


Dear Joyce

Nature is lovely, isn't it.  You will have to get some 'flight instructions' from Marge's 'chicks'.

Love Isobel ox


Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2004-04-22 10:57 AM


Thanks everyone.  I'm still waiting for the big revelation.  Love, Joyce
PatAngel
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6 posted 2004-04-25 12:03 PM


Dear Joyce,

I love nature, and this poem made me smile. It's so cute!!!!

Love,
Patricia

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7 posted 2004-05-15 07:30 AM


Cute! Oh the Love of good vision!

Deb

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8 posted 2004-05-15 09:59 PM


Joyce~
Well, a well-kept secret is was !
How I missed this, I'll never know !
BUT ... found it now and am delighted at the birthing of your Robins~

Awwwwww, I became so attached to my little nestlings ... it was one of those weepy-eyed moments when they took to wing~

I LOVE THIS !!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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9 posted 2004-05-16 04:24 AM


very cute
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10 posted 2004-05-16 10:59 AM


I wanna babysit too!
Its gd to be back, Joyce. I missed all of you

Love
MiCheLLe

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Joyce Johnson
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11 posted 2004-05-16 03:52 PM


And welcome back.  I hate it when our friends leave us.  Love, Joyce
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