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rainingwithsun Junior Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 19Toledo, Ohio USA |
Moonlight beams form a darkened sky, wisp of wind like a gentle sigh Stars above far and wide, crickets sing, locusts cry A lonely dog barks to the night, so melancholy and contrite The end of day is peaceful bliss, my favorite time to reminisce |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Scott~ This is just lovely~ A beautiful poem for a warm summer evening's read~ Thank you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Wonderful description of the end to day. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
rainingwithsun: Sounds like my neighborhood in the evening! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Beautiful writing! What comes to mind is the feeling I have when I return from work and enter my apartment. A wonderful peace surrounds me and all is well. Thank you for sharing. Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
impressionistic is the word. I would have loved firmer decisions however, a greater sense of what you want to tell us readers. what is different about your reminiscence from other peoples if you see what i mean? as it was, i loved it though... this is no crit just suggestion if you were to re-write it... "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
rainingwithsun: This is such a 'peaceful' verse. I love it. Thanks for sharing this poem with us all here in PIP. Love Isobel ox |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Moonlight beams form a darkened sky, wisp of wind like a gentle sigh ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Evening glory shines in your gentle poem. Some things come natural and it seems you have that special something. Well done! Deb |
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rainingwithsun Junior Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 19Toledo, Ohio USA |
Thank you Deb! |
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