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I only long to be...

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

0 posted 2004-03-11 05:09 PM

I only long to be in your arms
Snuggled in a warm embrace
To feel the tender hint
Of your lips upon my brow

I only long to be by your side
Hold your hand in mine
To sit through the night
Silently side by side

I only long to hear your laughter
Share your ups and downs
To know that I'm yours
And you're mine

I only long to be your girl
One and only love
If ever possible
All my life

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I'm hopelessly in love..

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

1 posted 2004-03-13 03:26 PM

sigh.. my poem is so lousy to the extent that nobody even bothers to comment.. well I'll do better next time

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2004-03-13 05:40 PM

Michelle~
Honey child .. there's NOTHING 'lousy' about this beautiful piece~

'I'm hopelessly in love..'

I *smile* ... if you're 'in love' ... you're NEVER hopeless~

I've been busy doing the grandmother thing, or would have replied sooner ... forgive me ?
Of course you do~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2004-03-13 06:43 PM

Dear MiCheLLe: I really like your poem and it makes me remember when I was young and newly in love! Sorry it's taken me so long to get in here. The last few days have been really busy ones for me. I see that this has been sitting here for several days with no comments. It's not because your poem lacks a thing, it's just that I guess, people have been busy like me! It's very good!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2004-03-14 02:41 AM

Lucky you, and your poem is lovely. Joyce

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