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junemac
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0 posted 2004-03-09 11:53 AM



Scrolling summer skies

Tipping over cliff edge view

Float on sea spray cove



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1 posted 2004-03-09 01:15 PM


Short and sweet, and I love the staccato rhythym of the last two lines!

"I am the hobbyhorse. I am the stapler in the mud, the toad in your brain. I am a head full of birds, a future full of apples."

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2 posted 2004-03-09 02:02 PM


Very lovely. Enjoyed. Chris

I have spread my dreams under your feet; Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

- William Butler Yeats



    

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3 posted 2004-03-09 02:23 PM


very nice!
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