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Head in the clouds |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk
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Scrolling summer skies Tipping over cliff edge view Float on sea spray cove |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
Short and sweet, and I love the staccato rhythym of the last two lines! "I am the hobbyhorse. I am the stapler in the mud, the toad in your brain. I am a head full of birds, a future full of apples." |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very lovely. Enjoyed. Chris ![]() I have spread my dreams under your feet; Tread softly because you tread on my dreams. |
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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
very nice! |
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