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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2004-03-07 05:18 PM



If you weep
deep in the woods,
alone,
does the Universe hear?

Will the tears that drop
upon the Earth beneath,
make Spring more beautiful?

These sobs that come from deep
wounds finally healing,
Will they blossom Spring
upon this Soul?

I believe these things to be true..

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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1 posted 2004-03-07 06:07 PM


Ellie~Yes, Yes and Yes!
This is so very beautiful.
What a tender soul you have.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

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2 posted 2004-03-07 06:15 PM


Elegantly written Ellie and I believe it too.
Joyce

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3 posted 2004-03-07 06:18 PM


EllieDearEllie~
I truly hope so~

This is hopeful ... and that's a good, good thing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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4 posted 2004-03-07 09:39 PM


awesome write..I love this
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5 posted 2004-03-07 11:48 PM


ellie:  Such a poignant write! Beautifully expressed.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2004-03-08 04:45 PM


very wonderfully done... I love the outdoors so!
Beasley
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7 posted 2004-03-08 05:32 PM


That a beautiful thought that the tears that drop on the earth make the spring more beautiful. That's beautiful!
love, Barb

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