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Jo Lou |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State ![]() |
Jo Lou At last a little happiness For challenged sweet Jo Lou. He didn't mind she was different For he was different too. This tiny maiden lady was The first time on her own. Her mama taken from her, left Her exposed and alone. Her only brother tried to help, He said he'd take her in. She begged him to give her the chance A new life to begin. She loved her new apartment in This place that offered care And yet gave her independence. She could be happy there. She found a gentle friend like her Who too had been forlorn. They watched TV together, shared A bowl of fresh popped corn. She was born into a family Replete with lovely cousins. The babe, Jo Lou, was lovely too, Another among dozens. Her mother noticed first of course, So late to sit, to talk to walk. Her loved ones milled around her Daring anyone to mock. The doctor finally told her mom, "I'm sorry she is spastic." This lovely child who seldom cried With smile that was fantastic. Her parents went from place to place Wanting a better answer. The verdict was more of the same. She'll never be a dancer. Her arms and legs refused to be Guided by her strong will. She struggled just to say a word Or do a basic skill. Her intellect was quite intact Her sense of humor too, But every act so much harder Than it is for me and you. She had her bit of freedom Before being called away. An angel came to take her home. Jo Lou's dancing today. Joyce 02/29/04 [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (03-07-2004 10:37 AM).] |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Awww Joyce ![]() I like poems with storylines.. and yours never fail to disappoint me with their poignancy ![]() Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Thank you dear friend for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Joyce, this poem is very touching and brings back fond memories for me. My friend Janice fosters a boy with cerebal palsy. He always has a smile on his face. This verse: She loved her new apartment in This place that offered care And yet gave her independence. She could be happy here. Maybe the last line might read: She could be happy there. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Love Isobel |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joyce~ I felt the tender of this~ Thank you for sharing Jo Lou~ ![]() *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Thanks Isobel. It is supposed to be. That's what comes from posting too late at night. Love, Joyce |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Thanks Marge. It always seemed so unfair that such a grand spirit was wrapped in such an imperfect body. Love, Joyce |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: Of course you know this one is close to my heart! Very loving and well done! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I'm glad you liked it Betty. She was my niece and a gallant soul. Love, Joyce |
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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
very well written! |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Joyce, This is another beautiful, thoughtful poem. It is so sweet and loving. I really enjoyed it. love, Barb |
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