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Amiè Delicâte |
IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time |
**This is a characterization poem I did for my short story's main girl I cry for thee, transfix-ed one. Where the lilies bend and your sorrows grow, can you not see it, gazing lancetly from unpieced by unpieced shard of glass? Oh, breathe steadily, enrapt by your own countenance, sharpened ecstasies ladled by narcissia fragmented silver and golden loom breathe a shallow hymn! Flushed with fever at the noonday slivers of sun, slanting in a museful deliverance unto your outstretched hands, combing methodically through a sheet of liquid silk, stained mahogany with flagrant sin, your eyes darken enviously that any other should conceive a hue such as this, carved from Eden's cypress trees. Vacancy is a poignant shadow that draws around you now. I cry for thee, my curs-ed one. Soul bound, untied from existence, infinince traced beauty with an ageless finger, and you were healed of mortality's affliction, staring languidly into reflections of an unknown world. In a rush of vainglory, you delight; for what could be more exquisite than this ashen pride, fragily claimed 'pon a ravished face? Immortal elegance does not betray human veins, in which flows a torrid blood, until the flaws of pristine skin, unweave an obsession vast. Mysterious lust for the imbalance he causes in your meticulous daydreams, akin to a certain glory replaced, is undoubtedly fatal. Left behind, your vigil of conceit.. what is so enticing, as he feeds you, hunger that you must breathe your precious song to us, no more, no ever so fated ...more? I cry for thee, poor tainted one. Oh, my fair Amiè Delicâte! If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A very delicate weave of imagery and metaphor! Enjoyed! Grover. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Brilliant imagery Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Hooo Rayyyy , excellency -Wolf |
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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
very nicely done! |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
Another awesome piece; you are good!! "I am the hobbyhorse. I am the stapler in the mud, the toad in your brain. I am a head full of birds, a future full of apples." |
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