Corner Pub #2 |
Withdrawal |
IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time |
oh, Lali. if you ever knew how bad i've got it, i'll be damned. ~ He touched her fingers through solid glass and she wondered why the seasons failed to compromise each wilted, morbid scream. She touched his soul through solid glass and he wondered why distance could taste so very sweet even 'tween winter's song. They touched the other through solid glass and each wondered why friendship cost them such fierce withdrawal as needs spilled through the years. ~ If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very pretty writing. Joyce |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
what Joyce said... this is a wonderful piece bravo! the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda sad |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
I find this to be fiercely poignant, great job! |
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