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PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

0 posted 2004-02-24 04:12 PM

Love is a passionate fire,
dancing through the night,
filled with unyielding desire,
it fills the world with light.

Without one to kindle it,
the fire is sure to expire,
for love cannot commit,
without someone to admire.

The fire that engulfs too quickly,
will cease to shed its light,
and its only distant memory,
will be of the unloving night!

[This message has been edited by PassionatelyRomantic (02-24-2004 09:39 PM).]

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

1 posted 2004-02-24 04:49 PM

Dear Jared,

I like this very much

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

2 posted 2004-02-25 09:37 AM

Thank you very much midnightblues I'm glad you enjoyed.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-02-25 06:41 PM

This was a fantastic write! It flowed so nicely, beautiful rhymes. Well written, I enjoyed it! Grover.

PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

4 posted 2004-02-25 07:16 PM

Thank you for your very kind comments Grover, I'm very pleased you enjoyed it

Isobel
Senior Member

since 2004-01-17

Posts 529
Qld, Australia

5 posted 2004-02-28 03:08 AM

Your name befits your poetry. A wonderful poem.

Love Isobel

Beasley
Senior Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 682
Cheboygan,MI USA

6 posted 2004-02-28 07:12 AM

What wonderful gifts you have! To be able to love like that and put it into words is incredible.
love, barb

PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

7 posted 2004-02-28 09:28 AM

Thank you all for taking the time to read and comment on my poem... Your words are inspirational... they are what keep me going. Thanks!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2004-02-28 02:12 PM

(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, this is pretty, sweet friend, love always needs to be treated and fueled with loving care, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jared, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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