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Beasley
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since 2003-11-28
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Cheboygan,MI USA

0 posted 2004-02-14 10:25 AM


NEWS NECESSARY NOW
NORMAL NIGHTS NEVER


CURRENTLY:
The cute crow
Cunningly croaks
Christmas carols
Cautiously.

BASICALLY:
Baskets of biscuits broke
Billowing backward from the bus
Bothering billions of
Bikers barreling belligerently by.

STILL:
Several sinkfuls
Of silly soap
Surged into the sewer
Slinking slime
Sloshing, slurping, swishing.
Some sounds, the same.
Surely,
This soapy sewer sluices water.
Seldom though.
Shame!

VALEDICTION:
Vern values violets,
Various variegations,
Not vain about his vagary,
The variety, valiant!
A venture through
A valley
Of vast vegetation,
Veering and vaulting velvet,
A verdant version,
Victorious in his village,
Volumes of vim and vigor,
Void of venom.
Ventilation at a vertex.
Vandals vie for victory,
Victimizing the vicinity,
As vignettes are viewed vastly!
Vulnerable Vern!

Barb Gedman


© Copyright 2004 Barbara Gedman - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-02-14 04:00 PM


Rhythmic! Grover.
Beasley
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Cheboygan,MI USA
2 posted 2004-02-14 05:36 PM


Got carried away!!!!!!
Barb

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3 posted 2004-02-21 04:24 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh my gosh, these are soooooo bouncy and fun, sweet friend, I love the first one especially, I can't wait to hear a crow croon Christmas carols, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barbara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
4 posted 2004-02-22 01:45 AM


LOL
Barb this is hilarious!

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-02-22 07:58 PM


well carry on getting carried away!
Beasley
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Cheboygan,MI USA
6 posted 2004-02-27 08:02 AM


Thanks for all of your comments. I still think it sounds like I had "engine run-on" and needed a tune-up.
love, Barb

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