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Beasley
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0 posted 2004-02-09 04:23 PM


A World Of Her Own

Whirling
Like leaves caught in a wind current
Revolving in endless circles.
Golden curls, grasping the rays of the sun,
Shimmering, shining.
Day dreaming of dollies dancing
Watching puppies play.
Whimsical! Wonderful!

Twirling
Like a wheel spinning round and round
Revolving in endless circles.
Satin bows bouncing, ribbons cascading,
Bright colors glittering.
Smelling lilacs, savoring scents,
Stroking satin pillows
And wistfully padding through puddles.
Mystical!  Magical!

Swirling
Little hands smearing paint in tinted rings
Revolving in endless circles.
Cunning costumes, catching compliments.
Ruffles and pleats busy with tones.
Chasing billowing butterflies, kissing kittens.
Singing sweetly, instilling images.
Enchanting!  Entrancing!

Barb Gedman



© Copyright 2004 Barbara Gedman - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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1 posted 2004-02-09 05:41 PM


Yes indeed, you do "instill(ing) images!" Grover.
Beasley
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2 posted 2004-02-09 06:08 PM


Thanks, Grover, you are very sweet.
Barb

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3 posted 2004-02-09 07:32 PM


This poem dances on the page.  Nice.  Joyce
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4 posted 2004-02-09 10:04 PM


Barb:  I can see that little girl you are wirting about!  You have captured her perfectly!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

iliana
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5 posted 2004-02-12 02:05 AM


A wonderful portrait here!  
Beasley
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6 posted 2004-02-12 04:59 PM


Thank you for your kind comments.I so enjoy being a part of all of you!
Love, bArb

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7 posted 2004-02-22 08:47 PM


great big smile
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