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Brenda Hall
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0 posted 2004-01-29 03:39 PM


The Amazing Book Of Life

God created the foundation of Life's Book
And is bound with life's vows we took
Pages form with our first earthly breath
Eternal pages embrace our timely death

Life's journey is like rippling streams
Filled of many shaped stones, it seems
Sometime those stones hinder life's flow
As the living pages continue to grow

Through every event and breath we take
Is woven into each living page we make
Life's adventures of laughter and strife
Grace pages of The Amazing Book Of Life

By: Brenda H
"thepassionatepoet"

© Copyright 2004 Brenda Hall - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-29 06:26 PM


So right and remember our life is an open book to God.  Joyce
Grover
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2 posted 2004-01-30 06:49 PM


Great insight! Grover.
pegasus111
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3 posted 2004-01-30 09:03 PM


well written. belated welcome to the corner. please excuse my absence.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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4 posted 2004-01-31 04:59 PM


I enjoyed your poem.  Well written!

Betty Lou Hebert

ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2004-02-01 07:39 AM


Beautiful poetry!! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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6 posted 2004-02-01 01:17 PM


Brenda~
Lovely, lovely poetic thoughts~
touching
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Isobel
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7 posted 2004-02-02 06:15 AM


A Lovely poem.  It is Amazing and so is Grace.

Isobel.


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8 posted 2004-02-07 05:09 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwwww, and even now the story continues, may your story be filled with many more blessings and joys ahead, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brenda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Rex Allen McCoy
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9 posted 2004-02-08 09:09 AM


enjoyed reading your thoughts in this one ...
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Through every event and breath we take
Is woven into each living page we make
Life's adventures of laughter and strife
Grace pages of The Amazing Book Of Life

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wonderfully said

iliana
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10 posted 2004-02-12 01:59 AM


Brenda, enjoyed this very much.  
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11 posted 2004-02-22 08:48 PM


well done!
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