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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Changing Path Hand held in trembling hand the protector and the protected facing danger, swords in hand. Standing on firm foundation knowing deep in knower defeat is not an option. Waiting, on guard, expecting an enemy show of mighty hand probing the never ending dark. Light flashing on the path direction, clearly illuminated unseen allies mark the way. Cautiously advancing they go borrowed armor glowing bright facing their fear with confidence. Strength flows from ancient word those who oppose are disposed swords cutting both to and fro. They progress together as one watching, guarding each step bonded in battle and covenant. They smile a little for each roles interchange with precision reliance gloved, earned with love. ~~~~~~  |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Very intense! Nice Poem. Barb |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very nice. I was visited by my twin grandbabies today. I can see them in a few years, the little boy protecting his sister with his shining sword. Love, Joyce |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just love how life gets everyone to reach to one another, sweet friend, first parents take care of their children then when the children geow up they take care of their parents, and everything in-between! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Interesting and well written! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A very well written poem. It's obvious much work went into this! Grover. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
A whole world of imagination exists ... just waiting for those who can see it and walk within  sparking some wonderful memories here |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
i am humbled by the replies, my friends. Thank you each for the read, thought and input. Daniel |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Daniel Mighty strong poem. You know, words too can be cutting like swords. (Strength flows from ancient word)... Isobel |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
love thie poem...and people's different views on it. :-) |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
baby you know we have won the battles as of yet but we both know the war is still out there and we both know what we have to do to win the war. Thank goodness "Dad" is on our side. Your bb, Annie |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very powerful, very strong, i liked it, yet a person can see it two different ways. i will surely read more of your poems thanks for the insight |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty cool write |
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