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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Note: This is a song, so it is a little bit lengthy, I hope you don't mind. Who know's you might like it. Come and comment! Thanks. Yours To you, I might not have offered songs. To you, I might always seem...teasing you. To you, who I always call my brother, To you, whose hands I hold now, I confess I, I might not have treated you like a girl, Because you always seemed to me, a strong woman. You, you whom I always ask for a favor, It is you whom I turn to for stories I entail. It is you whom my broken heart turns to, Times and times again, I never thought it was your understanding That heal me. Times and times again, I never thought you could be so fragile, As tonight you sob in front of me. As you sob in front of me, my heart sinks. I feel helpless, but don't know what to say. I would be your crown, if you wish me be one. I just don't want you to suffer no more. I just want to be your ears when you cry awake at night. It's time for me to To make up all the years you silently stood by me. It's time for me to be a tree you can sit under. I, I might not have treated you like a girl, Because I was fooled by my self important. You, you whom I will never feel the same again, It is you whom I miss each night before I sleep. It is for you, I don't feel lonely anymore. Times and times again, I never thought I love you more than I ever did now- My healer... forgives me. Times and times again, I never thought you could be so fragile, As tonight you sob in front of me. As you sob in front of me, my heart sinks. I feel helpless, but don't know what to say. I would be your crown, if you wish me be one. I just don't want you to suffer no more. Sometimes I just wish time could stop And refresh again like cover of a book. I might have taken a path difference and we Might have wasted less time torturing each other. Stop a moment to reflect, It might have been good for us to go through what we had. We wouldn't have known each other as well as we do now, If all we did were sailing along the wind. To you, I will offer my share of happiness. To you, I will offer my share of your doubt. To you, whom I just realized I couldn't live without, To you, whose hands I hold now, I confess I love you. (c)Feb 8, 2004 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Sometimes I just wish time could stop And refresh again like cover of a book. I might have taken a path difference and we Might have wasted less time torturing each other. Stop a moment to reflect, It might have been good for us to go through what we had. We wouldn't have known each other as well as we do now, If all we did were sailing along the wind. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ gosh...this has been my problem all weekend....*sigh* this is sweet and I put it to music ;-) |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
The third line in the first stanza, "To you, who I always call my brother," caused me to trip. But on the second read I was on my feet again. It's just that I thought you were singing to a man (brother). Grover. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
ROFL........  Hahaha.......Bad thoughts Gover Eliza Simmons |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i have tears in my eyes, this something i needed to hear, something i have been thinking, but felt better hearing it. loved it thankyou |
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