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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2004-02-07 07:26 PM


Cold

Glancing at his scared face,
I ponder my heart what I could do to ease his pain.
I couldn't understand his word.
I couldn't see what he's seeing.

All that I could do,
Is to give him a piece of bread.
All that I could ever do,
Is to buy him some little gifts.

Is it too much for the society to take?
Open your heart,
Feel with your soul,
Try to feel the struggles they're facing.

Is it too much
For us to spent some money,
To give some warmth to someone
Who otherwise left in cold?

Isn't it too much...

(c)Feb 6, 2004
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2004 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2004-02-07 10:47 PM




(big angel hugs) It is never too much, as you can never stop giving as you always have it in you and the heart holds an infinite quanity of it! (sigh) If only we can give non-stop then harmony can be shared between us all, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Grover
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2 posted 2004-02-12 02:31 PM


Thanks for sharing! Grover.
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3 posted 2004-02-13 07:27 AM


ahh a warm heart on a chilly subject
its good to know there are real people who have a heart and a soul .... thank you
    wolf

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4 posted 2004-02-13 09:23 PM


Very nicely done. Enjoyed. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

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5 posted 2004-02-22 08:45 PM


no, never too much

you are beautiful

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