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I Like the Smell

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2004-01-29 12:26 PM

I Like the Smell

Fragrance thin like silky scarf,
Layered her presence in the air,
Yet a breeze would have her
Melted entwining with dust.

A breath and she is no more,
Yet I seek after her scarf each night she's gone.
A breath and all my hopes demolished in dark.
Dark coffee reminds me of her fragrance.

When she is there, I can't be near;
When she is not, I wish my fingers on her hair.
Yet when she is around,
It's hurt to see she isn't with me.

Fragrance thin like silky scarf,
If there is any chance, topics will find us.
Yet I can't help, but
To show how much I care.

If love comes too easily,
Some may not cherish;
Yet even if I'm a fool now, I
I can't help but be in love with-

You.

(c)Jan 28, 2004
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2004-01-29 12:56 PM

Thin and delicate.
Nice.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-29 07:46 AM

amazing how scent moves the soul
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Beasley
Senior Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 682
Cheboygan,MI USA

3 posted 2004-01-29 08:59 AM

This is a very pretty poem. I really enjoyed it.
Barb

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-02-22 10:01 PM

true that

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