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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2004-01-28 03:36 PM


River Humanity

Whop-de-ling, Whop-de-ling, Whop-de-ling,
As the rocks pat on the river.
River seems to be sobbing yet giggling,
A kind of mixture of humanity.

When river sees that
New laid eggs at river bank,
Her heart relieves
Then it's tighten.

A new born, yet the child will never see her parents.
A new born, yet it is time for life to be recycled.
A new born, yet the river knows she can't see them full grown.
Is this a missing? Or is this a joy?

Whop-de-ling, Whop-de-ling, Whop-de-ling,
As the rocks pat on the river.
River seems to be sobbing yet giggling,
All things have a kind of mixture of humanity.

(c)Jan 28, 2004
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2004 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-28 11:22 PM


Interesting writings, Eliza.  Joyce
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2 posted 2004-02-22 10:02 PM


very cool
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