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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time 
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It is morbid, it is calm. bitter serenity settles like a Sunday storm, pausing respectively to honor those dead and passing o'er horizon markings gray and thoughtful, destiny unrims me, lest I fall into tomorrow. It is morbid, it is calm. ubiquitous reveries of a reverent spring, wash desolation from their feet, and hang their souls to dry black and poignant, solitude defends me, lest tomorrow fails to rise. It is morbid, it is calm. reality prostitutes itself through illusion's presence, scantily demonstrating what it is to weaken and bend between the risqué white and distant, society betrays me, lest tomorrow comes today. If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear IndigoEve, I'm impressed! This is indeed an ingenius work of art  I like the flow, and the substance! Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
very nice work! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IndigoEve~ You are such a word-artist ... that I could still see the colors in this~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write..much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ ~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world have obviously never danced in the rain ~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
So much sadness in this well written piece. Joyce |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad stuff...but I understand |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
This is wonderfully-written; I'm going back for another helping! "I am the hobbyhorse. I am the stapler in the mud, the toad in your brain. I am a head full of birds, a future full of apples." |
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