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Fantasies in Frost |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Fantasies in Frost I see each frosted evergreen Stand glowing in the sun. It is a winter world, pristine, With morning just begun. By afternoon, the rime and frost Has melted from the trees And all that loveliness is lost, Until the night time freeze. But in the dark, the magic starts Occuring once again And fantasies in frost imparts, Upon my windowpane! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Really lovely. Winter isn't all bad. Love, Joyce |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I really enjoyed this Betty Lou! "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Hi, Wonderful! You make people aware of so much with your terrific poetry. That's what a gift is all about. Love, BArb |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: We are having a blizzard here today and supposed to get around 10 inches of snow by tonight. Looks like we will make it! There's wind too so will be drifting. Thanks for commenting! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Susan: Thanks. Nice hearing from you. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Barb: Thanks for always saying the right thing! That's also a gift you know! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Trillium (Betty Lou) A wonderful poem. You have such a way with words. What a blessing you are to all who read your poetry. Isobel |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Isobel: Thank you for your kind words! It's very rewarding to have such response. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you for sharing these beautiful images Betty Lou, it is a sight I have never seen. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
wow a feast for the imagination !!! lovely imagery conjured up from this one. hugs june xxxxx |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Sue: Well about now, I wish I had never seen it either! I am sooooooo tired of cold and frost and ice! Thanks for commenting. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
junemac: Thanks! I am yearning for warm days and no more snow! Betty Lou Hebert |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
this is a lovely read. U always appreciate small details that God gives to its creation. Blessed You, my friend. Love, Vivian Eliza Simmons |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Vivian: Thank you for your kind words! I always appreciate hearing from you! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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croyles Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 102 |
Just lovely! I fantasize all the time, can get a bit unhealthy though "Creativity is more inportant than knowledge." Albert Einstein. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
And the patterns of frost on the windowpane can be quite intricate. I enjoyed the images you created in this poem. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
croyles: Thanks for commenting. Nice to hear from you! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
scorpio: Thanks. Glad you enjoyed the poem Betty Lou Hebert |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Real enjoyment to read... very well written, professional! Grover. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Grover: Thank you. I appreciate your reamrks. I am also Canadian, though I've lived in the USA for a long time now. Betty Lou Hebert |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
wonderful images dear.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
pegasus111: What a nice surprise to see your comment here tonight. It's been too long since hearing from you last! hope all is well. Betty Lou Hebert |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Ah, Betty, Exquisire poetry! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Thanks ellie! Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beauty for sure |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
passing shadows: Nice of you to comment. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
A delightful poem Betty Lou. A wonderful read. Love Isobel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ I was thinking while reading this ... that you have such a lovely box of word-crayons with which you create these special portraitures of nature's scenes~ Lovely this ... lovelier you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Isobel: Thanks for reading. always enjoy hearing from you. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: You're the one with the box of crayons! What a colorful and special reply! Thanks. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Betty: The title intrigued me, and ur writing towed me along tis magical journey *mAnY huGLeTs* thanks for sharing, you're a dear Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Betty: The title intrigued me, and ur writing towed me along tis magical journey *mAnY huGLeTs* thanks for sharing, you're a dear Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
MiCheLLe: Thanks for your comments. It'a always great to hear from you. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwwww, this is precious, sweet friend, and may prisms and crystals forever twinkle to you in the evenings and mornings reflected by the lazy tea-house moon, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Betty, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: I appreciate your comments. I am really ready for spring! all the ice and crystals will be but memory soon, I hope. Thanks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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