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Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-05-17 08:33 PM

Restless sea churns forth
White-capped as a linen glove
Waving caution's hand

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-05-17 09:11 PM

Dennis~
This is wonderful !
You ALWAYS inspire me ... thank you.

Frothy churn of sea
Beckons whale close to the boat
Searching for Jonah

See what I mean ???
Again, I thank you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

2 posted 2001-05-17 10:21 PM

Bravo. As an old man from the sea, I can respect the caution.
Good read.
Melton

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-18 01:40 PM

This was really great. I usually expect a dif. kind of haiku, but this surprised me. Very well done.
I enjoyed it.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2001-05-18 06:42 PM

Very nicely done!

Betty Lou Hebert

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

5 posted 2001-05-18 10:00 PM

This was Great..Perfect image in everything in my mind.

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and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

6 posted 2001-05-19 02:37 PM

the analogy is superb! Cleverly written and so alive with imagery! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2001-05-25 12:35 PM

dennis, this is my all-time favourite from you....i liked it that much

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 2001-05-26 08:59 AM

Very good, Dennis!

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

9 posted 2001-05-26 09:11 AM

Add a BRAVO and WELL DONE from your
proud Brother!

No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-05-26 01:25 PM

"linen glove" is absolutely brilliant!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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