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Faces of Winter - Haiku Trilogy
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Faces of Winter - Haiku Trilogy |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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The Wind Chill wipers stealing the warmth from faces grim teeth clenching smiles Sad frozen faces Pansies with their smile gone laughter waits till Spring The Earth's frozen face Springs Hope hidden deep within Love's seed eternal A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ It's SO GOOD to see you here~  These are marvelously depictive if the season~ THIS - 'The Wind Chill wipers' - such a wonderful word-play~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I love these Ellie. So sweet and sharp. I am trying to think towards spring now, but these really portray winter. Love, Joyce |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, The essence of winter captured by the economy of words, plus the forward expectation of Spring, the time of resurection. Thoughtful and clever. P.U.Y.M.S. Dennis |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
i so love the way this one is set out with the freezing truth of winter and the warm sunny prospect for the spring. june x |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
burrrrrrr! |
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