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Skaters Folly - Haiku

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2004-01-07 08:38 PM

The ice skating rink
Feathered friends feign Olympic
Bird-bath in winter

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (01-08-2004 07:24 AM).]

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

1 posted 2004-01-07 10:33 PM

Ellie,
Bravo, Simplicity, yet a beautiful snapshot of a meaningful (and Humorus)moment.

Well done my friend!
P.U.T.Y.M.S

Dennis

P.S. Thanks for your kind words on my almost forgotten poerty

Shereen
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 57
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-01-07 10:35 PM

How perfectly fitting Ellie - it is approximately seven degrees out my door right now! Brrrrrrr!!! I can't even imagine how those poor little creatures can even survive such temperatures. I really like this one! Well done.
Shereen.

Sparticus
Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

3 posted 2004-01-08 09:40 AM

Simple, great observation.

Jesse

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2004-01-08 10:11 AM

A unique way of seeing them. The blackbirds come in flocks to my feeders and I can't keep them filled for the wee ones. Love, Joyce

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-01-08 11:33 AM

Beautiful ellie!
I love this...wonderful imagery.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2004-01-09 12:58 PM

ellie: Very clever and well done!

Betty Lou Hebert

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

7 posted 2004-01-10 09:18 AM

Very well done. I can see the events unfolding.

believe in what your heart feels...

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

8 posted 2004-01-10 03:32 PM

perfect !! captured like a photograph.

i enjoyed this very much

hugs june x

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-01-17 01:56 PM

wow!

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