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Translucent Breaths

symphony_of_thoughts
Member

since 2003-08-03

Posts 95
Somewhere

0 posted 2004-01-07 06:54 PM

Walking along the edge,
Sometimes too close,
But sometimes too far.
I look over the edge and can't see,
The bottom or the top,
Trapped in ecstasy,
Ready to crumble.
My only way out,
Sandwiched between,
The small challenges,
Of the day to day,
War.
I wait for the wings of birds,
To carry me off upon the sun,
So I may stay in this place,
But move beyond the thin,
Walkway,
Suspended upon
The sky where I live
And where I live to live
Till the end where I cease.

Shereen
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 57
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-01-07 11:15 PM

I can relate to this and I truly hope the wings of liberation are close. Well done, indeed.
Shereen.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-01-17 02:04 PM

you know I understand totally!

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