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Sparticus
Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

0 posted 2003-12-13 09:53 AM

May I know where your legs go?
Lying across my lap wrapped
around the couch, wandering
out the door while your arms wave me in?

How your feet dangle in the water
where ships pass like razors before your smile.

I walk the mile between the peak of your hips
down to your knee, reveling in the pristine view.

Your lips float on my mouth, two life preservers
keeping me from falling into you like a surging storm.

Your cable thick black hair drizzles down
to my hands climbing through your words.

Did I mention you slide into my life, slipping through
the broken barriers like water finding my stolen heart?

If I fail, your hands lay a map before me, if I fall,
you laugh and prepare a bed, when I smile, you smooth my cowlicks.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-12-13 02:20 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Wow, this is one fabulous daydream, sweet friend, follow your heart and either let the wind fill your sails or walk the plank and soar into a different fantasy! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jesse, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Laicie
Junior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 37
Australia

2 posted 2003-12-13 07:45 PM

Sparticus,
Wow, I really liked this poem. Great use of words! I can't say which lines were my favourite, because they all were!
Laicie

Sparticus
Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

3 posted 2003-12-13 08:38 PM

Thank you so much, I am glad you both liked it, MA and L, I hope your seasons are doing well.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

4 posted 2003-12-14 08:44 PM

Wow...Sparticus...

You keep writing like this and I'll just have to keep reading!!

I love it! Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-01-06 09:44 PM

You still AMAZE me~
This is beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2004-01-07 01:14 AM

You really have a sway with words. And I mean that. Joyce

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

7 posted 2004-01-07 04:16 PM

I enjoyed your poem. well written

Sparticus
Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

8 posted 2004-01-08 09:23 AM

Thank you all...I do love this forum. It is sane and lovely.

Happy New Year!

I will be back...

Jesse

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-01-17 02:06 PM

wow! what a write!

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