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Laicie
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 37
Australia

0 posted 2003-12-12 03:27 AM



Mummy, mummy can’t you see?
I’d be your child and you’d love me.
I only want one chance to live
and I have so much love to give.
Mummy, mummy can’t you tell?
you’d have this guilt you can’t dispel.
Mummy, try to reason why
you want your precious child to die.
I know you’re full of doubt and fear
but you have me inside you here.
I’d never leave you all alone
I just want you to call my own.
Mummy, watch my growing years
I’ll be the one to dry your tears.
I’m just a speck; I don’t know much
but I can feel your sweetest touch.
Mummy, please don’t make me go
I’d be the one you’d never know.

Those who love deeply Never grow old;
They may die of old age,But they die young.

Sir Arthur Wing Pinero

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Trillium
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2003-12-12 05:21 PM


Very moving and really has impact!  One can imagine an unborn child thinking along these lines.

Betty Lou Hebert

pictureme
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since 2003-11-28
Posts 248
Ohio, USA
2 posted 2003-12-13 01:00 AM


very moving....I felt an unwanted child begging to be wanted with the knowing if only given a chance....they'd be no chance but to love them. A bitter sweet read!
pictureme :-)

Laicie
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Posts 37
Australia
3 posted 2003-12-13 05:17 AM


Trillium & pictureme,
Thanks for your comments, guys. I don't remember what made me write this one, but I'm glad you liked it!

Those who love deeply Never grow old;
They may die of old age,But they die young.

Sir Arthur Wing Pinero

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-12-13 02:04 PM








(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, know deep down your mother will always love you and will never let you go as you will be her little angel girl forever! (sigh) This is a beautifully heartfelt write, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Laicie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Laicie
Junior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 37
Australia
5 posted 2003-12-13 07:26 PM


Thanks so much for your beautiful words, Noah.
Like I said, I don't know what made me write this, it just came into my head one day, so I wrote it down as quick as I could! Where do you get all these great pictures from? They're excellent! God bless you this Christmas.
Laicie   

Those who love deeply Never grow old;
They may die of old age,But they die young.

Sir Arthur Wing Pinero

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