Be Afraid of the Sun No More

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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-12-06 11:51 PM

Be Afraid of the Sun No More

I keep a diary of everything.
A piece of me, my past flees away
As I catch bits of paper rain in my hands.
Yesterday, the river of my eyes
Floods a dew out of red red sun.

Oh my mirror, the sea,
What a cruel joke it made,
I see another red red sun
Sitting right next to me.
Oh how much I want to lend her my shoulders.

A bland breeze, a feeble sponge,
Gently walks across the river of my eyes,
Chasing behind the trace of the dews,
Until the red red sun is hidden
Behind the white smiley clouds.

Tomorrow will be another dawn,
Yet I desire the sunset of today.
Tomorrow will be too vague,
Today I'm glad, because I'm alive.
Yesterday was my lock,
A lock that was sealed in a guarded place.

Balmy puff brings my soul home,
Suddenly I have heartbeats again.
Now I'm not afraid of the sun,
For it can't burn me,
I'm protected under the clouds.

Tomorrow will be another dawn,
Yet I desire the sunset of today.
Tomorrow will be too vague,
Today I'm glad, because I'm alive.
Yesterday was my lock,
A lock that was sealed in a guarded place.

A bland breeze, a feeble sponge,
Gently walks across the river of my eyes,
Chasing behind the trace of the dews,
Until the red red sun is hidden
Behind the white smiley clouds.

(c)Dec 6, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

Sparticus
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since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

1 posted 2003-12-07 12:13 PM

Well written piece. A lot of feeling poured into this one.

Sparticus

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-12-08 02:59 AM

wow! this has some awesome imagery!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-12-13 12:47 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Know always that the sun will rise to you and offer a light of promise, so embace it with open arms each today! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-13-2003 12:48 PM).]

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