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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
From the depths I call your name but the only sound is the rapid bumping of my heart shattering the quiet of my tomb like existence. Warm in your arms, shaking away half forgotten dreams I glance at your beloved face as an imperceptive flash, brighter than any day, steals away my sight. Falling, falling, absorbed in utter despair, paina mere irritation, then blackness. From the depths I call you............ [This message has been edited by Trillium (12-01-2003 09:53 AM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awwww...this is so sad, but sweet that you call out to the one you that seems to make all the bad go away.  Love, Terri~  |
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paraboxer Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 121Maryland, USA |
Great imagery, I do say. But there still seems to be some sort of hope left in your poetry.... |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
this one is very nice. good imagery and flow too. enjoyed x june x |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Maggie: You may want to go to "edit" and change the word "Bepths" in the title of your poem. I know you meant to type "DEPTHS" I enjoyed reading it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Well done. Joyce |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Maggie... Very nice...but sad. Thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh...this hurts |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you all for replying. I was trying to depict the moment the atom bomb hit. Trillion I looked for the edit button but cat find it. Maggie |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Maggie: The "edit" button is in the row right above your poem. Third one in from the left. Just click on it and it will take you back to your post, so you can make corrections. No big thing, as everyone enjoyed your poem and knew it was a typo in the title! I changed it for you! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert [This message has been edited by Trillium (12-01-2003 09:54 AM).] |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you so much Trillion, all the time I have used this forum I could never find it. Maggie |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Maggie, I too feel this way ever so much looking back on the atom bomb in history and that is why hopelessly I still cry knowing there are actually many who support war and until we have peace-loving people in our offices that aren't Bush, this history will only repeat itself over and over again! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maggie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
I agree with you entirely Noah. Maggie |
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