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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time 
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There was a time when I kept ink with me, and quills, in a small leather pouch. I would walk along the shorelines of never, watching as a sunset stained itself with miracles. At times, when the tides were too low, or the ocean too deep, I wrote sonnets for a man I hardly knew, my skin absorbing words, more like enigmas than anything. Of course, there is no expanse of understanding for why I did this. One does not question the artist, and what reasons compel them to mix black and white, somehow creating the phenomenon of blue. No, I preferred unpainted dreams, crudely cast, in an adulterated world. These are indelicate to the touch, and blush at twilight in shame, for there is but little beauty lurking within cruelty. You must have the eyes of an artist to see what I have seen. Sometimes, when night lasted on my fingers, I could taste destiny in the beads of smoke, falling and lost to the bend of an arm. Precision exists somewhere, I could feel it, all wrapped 'tween the incense Elysium yields: a dream world. Once, a very long time ago, before I knew even to forge ink from the blackness tears were made from, there was day, and there was the hour of a white silver sun. I worshipped argentine. She made me immortally sound by her law of unquenchable gravity. An addiction so incurable was mine, that evening fabricated its preciously strewn and demurely unspeakable lie, around a notion of false forgiveness. From my obsession it took its lust of morning, and asked me, beautiful, isn't it, the way you break? And there was a time when I kept ink with me, and quills, in a small leather pouch... it was then that I found the answer to the question I never sought. If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi [This message has been edited by IndigoEve (11-25-2003 08:01 PM).] |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
You write with a great deal of wonderful images. Very much enjoyed. Sparticus Even with insects- |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
"the shorelines of never, watching as a sunset stained itself with miracles." I love this particularly...Sparticus is right...very nice imagery and woven in a very interesting pattern. Thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is very fanciful writing. Joyce |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is very good. Well written with a lot of feeling. Deb |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Answers are not meant to be found in a conscious state, let them come to you, as that is an artist's creed! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Now that's poetry! You surely have the gift. But then, all indigos do. Thanks, coyote [This message has been edited by coyote (11-27-2003 01:02 AM).] |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Very poignant. I take paper and pen with me when I go to bed, it is always in the night when, just as I awake I get poetic thoughts. Lovely read. Maggie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IndigoEve~ STUNNING~ 'I would walk along the shorelines of never, watching as a sunset stained itself with miracles.' You are just soooooo original in poetic thought~ You're going places young poetess~ I want to be around to see your star shine~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
WOW! geeZ this is definitely one of my favs! I really like the way it flows... its just like painting the picture before my eyes! grEatHugZ Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
vivid imagery here...love this write! |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
This is just awesome! For your young age you have an immense amount of talent! "I am the hobbyhorse. I am the stapler in the mud, the toad in your brain. I am a head full of birds, a future full of apples." |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Wow, this is beautiful...you do have a way with words. Lovely this was to read!  Love, Terri~  |
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