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Sparticus
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0 posted 2003-11-29 07:15 PM



Flavors savored


Queen, your face shows all our love
done under the blanket of
expectations brought

into our bed as we lie
savoring flavors hidden
under clothes and fears.

Where each of us lay as we
are found by the eyes we need
the hands we want, the

sighs that come without greed of
needing escape, by the fond
collection of seed

planted when the day I saw you
walking on clouds into my
arms, straight from God.

Yet we lay forgetting the
miracles that brought you to
me, the gift of life

ever in your body's haunting
scent captured by every tongue's
contact with you, love.

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

© Copyright 2003 Sparticus - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-11-29 08:22 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry because I believe He has a plan for us all individually, and He believes we are meant to be with another in earnest and for life to bring two together truly is divine magic! (smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I hope you and your whole family had the happiest Thanksgiving, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jesse, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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2 posted 2003-11-30 01:12 AM


nice...yes
Sparticus
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3 posted 2003-11-30 09:47 AM


Thank you kindly, Angel and Shadow.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

Insomniac Cat
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4 posted 2003-12-01 07:35 PM


Another great piece! Enjoyed!

"I am the hobbyhorse. I am the stapler in the mud, the toad in your brain. I am a head full of birds, a future full of apples."

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5 posted 2003-12-01 09:59 PM


Jesse~
Should you hear a *sigh* from the South Easterly sky ... you will recognize that it is me~

'sighs that come without greed of
needing escape, by the fond
collection of seed

planted when the day I saw you
walking on clouds into my
arms, straight from God.'


Probably the loveliest thought I have read this day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

Sparticus
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6 posted 2003-12-02 02:35 AM


Thank you Cat and Marge...I am happy that you enjoyed it.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

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