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cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2003-11-29 04:36 PM

From the depths
I call your name
but the only sound is
the rapid bumping
of my heart
shattering the quiet
of my tomb like existence.

Warm in your arms,
shaking away half
forgotten dreams
I glance at your beloved face
as an imperceptive flash,
brighter than any day,
steels away my sight.

Falling, falling, absorbed
in utter blackness,
pain a mere irritation
then blackness

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

1 posted 2003-11-29 06:25 PM

Oh, Maggie...

What an intense verse...very well done. But, I sincerely hope this is not from first-hand knowledge.

Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Insomniac Cat
Member

since 2003-09-23

Posts 69
The Land of the Dadaists

2 posted 2003-12-01 07:23 PM

Raw and powerful, a good read!

"I am the hobbyhorse. I am the stapler in the mud, the toad in your brain. I am a head full of birds, a future full of apples."

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-12-01 07:38 PM

Ouch...this sounds so pained, and torn. Sorry about your pain. :'(
Love,
Terri~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-12-01 09:21 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Maggie, I hope everything is alright, dearest friend, this sounds sad and I send many angel healing hugs your way! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maggie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

5 posted 2003-12-02 04:59 AM

Thanks jaicie but I was trying to depict when the atom bomb struck. Maggie

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

6 posted 2003-12-02 05:01 AM

THANKS FOR READING I.C, mAGGIE

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

7 posted 2003-12-02 05:02 AM

THANKS FOR YOUR CONCERN TERRI, IT IS WHEN THE ATOM BOMB HIT. MAGGIE

[This message has been edited by cusick (12-02-2003 05:03 AM).]

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

8 posted 2003-12-02 05:04 AM

Thank you for your lovely reply Noah. Maggie

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