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junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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0 posted 2003-11-27 04:51 PM



My heart like a dusty old piano
Echoed timelessly in an empty hall
Sporadic,sad notes with interludes of silence
Reminders of empty years, peppered with hope
Time gathered dust and scattered my dreams
Hardening with the closing of each door
And the jarring of each sorry note I touched
Years dragged and like the piano I felt neglected
faded like an ancient but familiar  photograph

The dawning of the day we met began as any other
But a new haunting melody began to whisper to me
Sweet high  notes, gentle like distant birdsong
My heart sighed in  response  to your lullaby
Awakened by the promise of your evergreen anthem
Singing soft warm lyrics of eternal devotion
As your song broke the silence of my waiting soul

All at once I discovered life was wonderful
I had missed you all the years I hadnt met you
All the time I gathered dust  and without music
Loves breath came in with the dawn that  day
Blowing away the dust and cradling my heart
With the velvety whisper of your incredible  love.

© Copyright 2003 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
1 posted 2003-11-27 10:36 PM


Oh my, junemac....

My heart just melted...thank you so much!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-11-27 11:23 PM


Nice, loving write.
Love,
Terri~

Sparticus
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since 2003-11-15
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3 posted 2003-11-28 10:42 AM


Love expressed so well, the mood was set and you delivered a smile to this reader.

Sparticus

[This message has been edited by Sparticus (11-28-2003 10:42 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-11-28 04:47 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may you forever feel special and loved and your hearts piano hum symphonies forever! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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Singapore
5 posted 2003-11-29 12:17 PM


Dear June,

its lovely!

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-11-30 01:20 AM


this is gorgeous!
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