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Hold Me Tonight |
aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Hold Me Tonight Sometimes I sit alone On my side bed, Leaning forward Into my pillow, As I hide the me inside. True love won't lose who I am When I'm with you and always. Yet times after times I hide The bothering thoughts of mine, As you seek under each tree. If you love me, you shall Accept me as I am. True love will always lend an ear. Am I doubting your love, Or am I distrusting myself? Hold me into your arms tonight, As I dream your eyes look into mine- Speaking of Endless stories I never told, Yet somehow your heart understand...me. (c)Nov 26, 2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
This is a very incredible, from the heart, write. I felt every word...what better poem is that? wonderful read. Sparticus Even with insects- |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
I love this and waiting for the next. Maggie |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, and may true love always fill your heart and appreciate and love you for who you are and never deny you! (sigh) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: Very good writing! The emotions really came through each line! Betty Lou Hebert |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Nice soul-searching. Here's hoping you find your answers with comfort to follow if it's needed. Love, Terri~ |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Eliza, this is really nice! Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice...it gives me hope |
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