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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-11-19 07:43 PM


Oh Peace Knocks On Mine

Curling my body under my bed sheets,
I wish peace knock on my door.
And oh, thanks to our gracious Lord,
Peace has finally fallen upon my heart.

Peace to be eternally united with Him.
As if I was to be born again in His womb,
My flesh is secured in His huge yet
Delicate hands as though they were made of cotton.

Sleeping among snow white cotton plain,
As my pillow's feathers fall upon my noise,
I squeeze out a big hug to my Father.
My Father sees that I want a hug and returns one.

My Father's body is tender than any towel,
My Father's warmth is fonder than any hot shower.
I can lay within His arms and feel rest and safe.
Tomorrow I shall lay within His arms and feel worry no more.

Sleeping in peace eternally with my Lord,
Who will take away all my burden, and I shall have no past.
Everything belongs to the world is gone forever from my mind.
Today will be just a tomorrow, living on cotton plain.

(c)Nov 19, 2003
Eliza Simmons


Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (11-20-2003 01:02 AM).]

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magic_612
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1 posted 2003-11-19 11:01 PM


wow.. very good write!
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-11-19 11:41 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, now you're in high cotton with Him and Jesus at your side! (sigh) This is a beautiful blessing, sweet friend, always find comfort with the peace inside of you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-11-20 04:10 AM


nice...never liked religious stuff much, but this is good
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4 posted 2003-11-20 09:29 AM


Eliza~
A gently stirring write~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Sparticus
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5 posted 2003-11-20 03:27 PM


Very well done spirtual piece.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

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