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En La Noche Soltera...In The Lonely Night
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En La Noche Soltera...In The Lonely Night |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
En sus ojos misteriosas puedo yo te miro para siempre, una sauve parterre de muchas colores baja en la noche para mis manos buscando la paises en sus cuerpo denuda causa tu quierame. Si tu quedarse inmovil porque tu no lo quiera mi: deme la contrasena de sus corazon, permitirami explorar sus pensandos por unmomento preciouso con tu en mis brazos y buscar para un senal si tu mi quieras Si no!? Quedarse con mis ojos! Sin ti!? Ay son no rason mirar mas, no floras, ni algunas, ni el mar. Muneca, a la noche soltera cuando la luz de la luna lista en los arbors con intencion luguriosa, y mi pena causa tu decir adios, dar mi una cochillo largo a travers de el herido en mi alma! The translation... With those mysterious eyes I could gaze at you and lay in your green, lush flower bed chewing on every color you weave under the night sky, my hands seeking on your nude body the places where you will want me. But if you aren't moved by my longing because you don't want me, give me the password to your heart then permit me to explore your thoughts for a precious moment while you lay in my arms immobile, while I find what it takes for you to want me. If no!? Take away my eyes! Without you?! I have no reason to see! Flowers, things, nothing, not even the sea! Doll, in the lonely night when the moon smears its lonely light through the trees with wanton longing intentions and my pain causes you to say goodbye...plunge a long knife into my aching soul Note, I have been working on writing poetry in my second language, this is the longest attempt. Sparticus Even with insects- |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sparticus~ *sigh* ... I will write you a personal email to tell you just what this - 'my hands seeking on your nude body the places where you will want me. But if you aren't moved by my longing because you don't want me, give me the password to your heart then permit me to explore your thoughts for a precious moment while you lay in my arms immobile, while I find what it takes for you to want me.' - means to me this day~ But first ... I must find my own composure ... for I am lost in these thoughts~ I think that I thank you ...~ I'll let you know later~ Such poignant penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Thank you! I will always be willing to be a pen pal and discuss poetry any time at all! As the muse strikes, so must we feel the sting. Sparticus |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful..simply beautiful, in both languages. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Thank you kindly Enchantress for your read of this and commentary. Sparticus |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh my gosh, I just love it when poets write in multiple languages, sweet friend, being a Spanish learner myself, you did a great job here translating and I hope to see more of your Latin soul shine here! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sparticus, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Thank you kindly, Noah...I have been speaking Spanish at work for 12 years. I keep learning more as I have more and more friends that surround me that are primarily Spanish Speakers. Sparticus Even with insects- |
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