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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Tree shivers in breeze Pride of summer shaken free Airborne foliage Color falls from trees The emerald lawn obscured Bambo rake now smiles Pungent smoke billows Evidence of Summer burns Eyes dew in silence |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A great description of the change of season. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HiDennis~ What a lovely autumn read~ So, you're still around once in a while, eh ? GOOD !!!!!! MORE !!!!!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
dennis this is a fantastic haiku trio beauty set in autumn words. needs publishing and framing and keeping to warm hearts at this time of year. hugs from june x |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yay! Oh Dennis, this is beautiful and perfectly seasonable, sweet friend, let the autumn come and summer never be forgotten, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dennis, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Very nice these are. Much enjoyed. Terri~  |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
How do you do that? A beautiful subject. Smashing. Maggie |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
I enjoyed these very much. The sense of fall caught here is wonderful Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Well done haiku, I love all oriental short verse such as Mondo, Katauta, Somonka, Tanka, Sijo, Sedaka, Senru, Dodoitsu, etc. You take the form to a nice level. In Haiku the form should never get in the way of your expressions. You did very well expressing these. Sparticus |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Dennis I loved this....you have a talent for these!!!!! You captured my favorite season so nicely!!!! Very nice!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
I like these haiku's alot! great job |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dennis; dear friend...how your gift for haiku continues to grow more lovely! Hugs A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Shereen Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 57Michigan, USA |
These make me hauntingly nostalgic for the throes of Autumn. Being from the same state, you might agree right about now! So lovely, really.Shereen. |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
I enjoyed the reflections of the season in these. wonderful write. Jesse Even with insects- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done! |
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