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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2004-01-04 07:27 PM


Emotional Footprints

It has been winter...years after years,
Without much words uttered,
I felt our friendship... melted
As snow dissolved... at my door step.

Yet you,
It's you who tell me
Our footprints are still
Clinging on the snow.

It's your voice,
Deep into my ears,
Calls upon love,
My emotion to tears.

The bridge
That once was frozen by ice,
Now is broken... fallen into river,
Flowing into the deep... arm of the sea.

Yet a rainbow bows
Beckoning us as we climb,
Sitting on its shoulders,
As laughter slides... off its back.

It's your voice,
Deep into my ears,
Call upon love,
My emotion to tears.

It has been a winter... with stormy snow,
Without much of our notice,
Heavenly gate have mercy on us-
Spring has come to set us free.

(c)Jan 4, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2004 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
wintertao
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1 posted 2004-01-04 09:32 PM


very nice
passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-01-05 03:49 AM


bittersweet
Shereen
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3 posted 2004-01-06 08:48 AM


Entrapped in ice is the unknowing heart.
But love, like the Spring, warms the soul.
Fluid emotion:
A beguiling potion,
Heals the wound's gaping hole.

Very good.
Shereen.

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2004-01-06 09:42 AM


Eliza~
I thought this was just wonderful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2004-01-06 02:12 PM


Very wonderful Eliza.  Wonderful depth and emotion.  Love, Joyce
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6 posted 2004-01-17 01:34 PM


had to read this again
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