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Kensho_Cinder*
Junior Member

since 2003-10-29

Posts 10
In the Flow

0 posted 2003-10-29 09:15 AM

Droplets alight; rest.
The sun burns off the day’s frost;
Delicate balance.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

1 posted 2003-10-29 11:27 AM

Kensho: This is lovely and thank you for posting here. Welcome to Passions in Poetry and this site, Corner Pub. You will find many friendly people and good writers here. Watch for a special welcome message by e-mail. We're glad to have you and look forward to more of your work.

Betty Lou Hebert

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-10-29 11:59 AM

Welcome to Passions! I have a feeling you're going to like it here! Settle in, get comfy, if you have any questions, just ask!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2003-10-29 12:20 PM

My what a lovely haiku for me to wake up to this morning. A lot attempt haiku but they end up not depicting nature as it should be, but you have done this brilliantly. Welcome to Passions and I hope to read a lot more of your work here and in other forums on this site.

Try to make time to listen to
someone who talks from their heart.

Carpe' Diem

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

4 posted 2003-10-29 01:29 PM

Welcome to the place, Kensho.
Your haiku inspires:

This morning with snow
brings robins to a warmed bath.
Others wait their turn.

Thank you

gringakiwi
Member

since 2003-08-05

Posts 189

5 posted 2003-10-29 05:24 PM

Beautiful haiku. well done and welcome to PIP!

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

6 posted 2003-10-30 03:10 AM

lovely !!!

i am just beginning to look at this form of poetry and posted my first hewre recently. Yours though is an inspiration.
thank you for a beautiful read.

love june x

Kensho_Cinder*
Junior Member

since 2003-10-29

Posts 10
In the Flow

7 posted 2003-10-30 04:19 PM

Thanks for the kind words, everyone.
I look forward to reading more of your work here as well!
More to come....

[This message has been edited by Kensho_Cinder* (10-30-2003 04:20 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-11-01 12:02 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love the gorgeous vision of dawn in this spellbinding debut, sweet friend, this made me smile as it brought a twinkle to my eye, yay! God Bless You, I love this! Welcome to Passions, sweet Brandon, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your beautiful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brandon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-01-2003 12:03 AM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2003-11-01 12:08 PM

Brandon~
This is wonderful~
Welcome to Passions ... you're gonna LOVE IT HERE~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

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