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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time 
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(Thank you "Iris" by the Goo Goo Dolls, for this. Thank you to mike and lex for giving me something with which to remember what I always wanted, even though it's gone for you. You were once Neo and Trinity, yet still eternally seem to be.) so this is what it feels like to fall eyes bleed tears of voracious longing I want you living in a world of fallacy be here give me what they had you don't know me how is this real? fingers freeing my hands from drowning in your hair not now I never understood what you meant too soon not late enough but I know you like a silent disease kindle my emotion head aching in your palms given everything I never had where have you gone to, is it that far away from heaven? my wounds strengthened by your silver blood you are the mixture of fiction with flavors of lies and reality eyes matching hair is it possible, for brown to get so blue? look at me I just want you to know who I am it's not the precious feeling oh no, I cherish what I cannot have but you, materialize whispering quietly in my ear you need to find why am I there in every field you lie? it is the autumn breathing lending me words for my hidden rime what I speak through your dreams is poetry, but you are the ink with which I bleed silently so this is what it feels like to fall For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch, And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet" [This message has been edited by IndigoEve (10-27-2003 10:26 PM).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is a powerful write. I'll need to reread it several times to absorb the full measure of it's message. You're making me think! ...  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
yes, this make me think. This is nice. Eliza Simmons |
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Kensho_Cinder* Junior Member
since 2003-10-29
Posts 10In the Flow |
I loved this, and it does get the gears turning, indeed! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) "Iris" is one of my favorite songs also, dearest friend, I could understand how hard it is to fall and when "everything feels like the movies" it truly can be hard to distinguish the media from the street corner! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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