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Rose Pedals

Sublime Truth
Junior Member

since 2003-09-13

Posts 24
New Denver, B.C., Canada

0 posted 2003-09-16 11:18 AM

Rose Pedals

Growing in the hearts of today
Spent time with tomorrow
Raining down
Soft
Caressing droplets
Crimson rain…
…blood without pain

Given in love
From those in love
Wished and hoped for
By those of us
Without love
Rose pedals
Soft and gentle
Innocently sweet
As a loves first kiss
When two dancers first meet

- Hope you all enjoyed the read.

- The Sublime

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

1 posted 2003-09-16 01:22 PM

Sublime: I enjoyed your poem and it added a ndew insight into watching the fall of rose petals!

Betty Lou Hebert

Sublime Truth
Junior Member

since 2003-09-13

Posts 24
New Denver, B.C., Canada

2 posted 2003-09-16 05:59 PM

Thanks Trillium! I hope that the affect given was more postive then anything.

- The Sublime

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2003-09-16 07:29 PM

Lovely. Rose petals keep their charm even though dropped. Love, Joyce

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-09-19 09:15 PM

(smiles) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may all your wonderful days of romance be filled with rose petal dreams and whispers! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

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