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Sublime Truth
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0 posted 2003-09-16 11:18 AM


Rose Pedals

Growing in the hearts of today
Spent time with tomorrow
Raining down
Soft
Caressing droplets
Crimson rain…
…blood without pain

Given in love
From those in love
Wished and hoped for
By those of us
Without love
Rose pedals
Soft and gentle
Innocently sweet
As a loves first kiss
When two dancers first meet

         - Hope you all enjoyed the read.

                - The Sublime

© Copyright 2003 Joel J. Harrington - All Rights Reserved
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2003-09-16 01:22 PM


Sublime:  I enjoyed your poem and it added a ndew insight into watching the fall of rose petals!

Betty Lou Hebert

Sublime Truth
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2 posted 2003-09-16 05:59 PM


Thanks Trillium!  I hope that the affect given was more postive then anything.

      - The Sublime

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3 posted 2003-09-16 07:29 PM


Lovely.  Rose petals keep their charm even though dropped.  Love, Joyce
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4 posted 2003-09-19 09:15 PM






(smiles) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may all your wonderful days of romance be filled with rose petal dreams and whispers! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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