Corner Pub #2 |
The Windmill Turns |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
The Windmill Turns The windmill turns and down below, I watch to see sweet water flow And fill the tank up to the top. The horses wander in and stop To sink their noses in the treat Of icy water, in the heat The day has brought.They move away And bob their heads, as if to say A thank you for the drink.I see Them group beneath a lonely tree, To share the little patch of shade. I take my shoes off and I wade Across the tank, to cool my feet. I listen to the creaking beat Of windmill blades, still going round, To draw this treasure from the ground! Betty Lou Hebert Published by The Advocate, 2001 [This message has been edited by Trillium (09-13-2003 10:26 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful write Betty Lou. I can picture it all in my mind perfectly! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This was a wll known scene when I was young. Thanks for the memory picture. Love, Joyve |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Nightshade: Thanks for your nice comments. I enjoyed hearing from you. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: I had a feeling this would be a familiar scene to you! Thanks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
betty lou every time i read one of yours you take me to the exact place. i can see it, hear it, and smell it !!! thats very very clever writing. brilliant. hugs june x |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Betty Lou The imagery I saw through your words was outstanding and so very much enjoyed. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ Oh yes ... I have a favorite wind-of-milling that I visit~ This is just lovely my friend~ *Huglets* Hello there, RON~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
junemac: How nice to know you are not only sharing my poem but also the vision I see! Thanks! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Thanks! Appreciate hearing from you. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Thanks so much! Ron says "HI" back. We both enjoy hearing from you! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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