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Corner Pub #2

Roller Coaster

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

0 posted 2003-08-31 12:33 PM

You stir the ashes
All cold and grey
And an ember glows
To my dismay

I thought these passions
Of physical pain
Had withered and died
As youth did wane

Compelled once again
To sip loves sweet wine
Forbidden pleasures
In dreams that entwine

You cracked open my world
Set in stone for so long
Awakening my soul
And releasing my song

Where will this all end ?
In sorrow ? in pain ?
Hurting others
Caught up in this chain ?

It makes no difference
Its too late to brake
The essence of you
Leaves the rest in your wake

Do what you will
I am powerless and willing
I am caught in your web
Of loves endles thrilling

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

1 posted 2003-08-31 05:39 PM

I really enjoyed this one, great work!!

gringakiwi
Member

since 2003-08-05

Posts 189

2 posted 2003-08-31 08:42 PM

ooh, junemac, how raunchy! lovely words, they gave me gooseflesh! great write!

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

3 posted 2003-09-01 04:56 AM

I like it.

Melton

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2003-09-01 12:05 PM

Some things never change. Good for you. Joyce

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

5 posted 2003-09-01 05:40 PM

magic, melton, joyce and gringakiwi
thank you for reading and commenting on this one. i really enjoyed writing this and may write another similar as i felt rushed into finishing this.

i like the word RAUNCHY gringakiwi lol !!! thanks

hugs to all from june xxxxxxxxx

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2003-09-01 08:29 PM

junemac: This expressed your feelings so well and was enjoyable to read.

Betty Lou Hebert

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

7 posted 2003-09-02 05:58 PM

thnk you betty lou,
i am glad you enjoyed this one.

hugs june x

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