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Heroic Man |
cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Over in a couple of months you said. After an eternity of apprehension, fear is a living thing, dragging me into constant despair Your remembered smile bringing pain impossible to bear. Now, the rap on the door. Ice touches my heart as Fingers tremble on yellow. The final reaper takes his toll. Possessing the soul of a heroic man. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So sad.... Here's a shoulder should you want one...wow...sounds so hurtful. I am sorry this person is going through this.. Makes me sad. If it's you here's a and a shoulder. I just can't get over this overwhelming feeling of sorrow after reading this. I pray it gets better soon. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You truly brought a moment to life~ Sadly, for those who must bear the bearer of bad news~ GOOD GOOD penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent expression, cusick. Very well written. |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you Shararose. No it's not me. I based it on the first world war when people received bad news in the form of a telegram. Maggie |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you Marge. It must have been a dreaful time. Maggie |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you so much Denise. Maggie |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Maggie: This is so moving and charged with emotion. Excellent! Betty Lou Hebert |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
this is so very moving. absolutely perfectly expressed brillant hugs june x |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Trillian, it is a pleasure to share poetry with appreciative poets. Maggie |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you June, pleasrd that you liked it Maggie |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
June, I am so pleased that you liked it. Maggie |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
This was lovely, but so sad when you think about the inspiration beautiful poem. Connie. xx |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you Connie, I get my inspiration from the most peculiar places. Maggie |
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