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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2003-09-01 02:37 PM


Anesthesia

The sudden descent into darkness,
The slow of awaking to pain.
Though I wish it away,
It is nearing the day
I must travel this path once again.

It's a place that no one can go with me.
It's a road I must travel alone.
I know the full score
I have been here before.
It's a dug up, much chewed on old bone.

Why should I feel such a horror?
Why this unreasoning quake?
As my sense I surrender
To hands less than tender,
I hear a voice call me awake.


By Joyce 9/1/03

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (09-01-2003 02:59 PM).]

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junemac
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1 posted 2003-09-01 05:35 PM


yes joyce, sooooooo true and so scary too. i love this stanza
It's a place that no one can go with me.
It's a road I must travel alone.
I know the full score
I have been here before.
It's a dug up, much chewed on old bone.

( especially the last line and all of the flow of it )

enjoyed this !!

hugs from june xxxxxxx

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2003-09-01 07:14 PM


Thanks June for your comments.  It is my seventh sinus operation.  I am having it Wednesday and the absolute time that I dread  is that head swimming moment I am going under the anesthetic.  June
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3 posted 2003-09-01 07:44 PM


Dear Joyce: dont worry! it is horrible I know, but you will be fine, and we will be thinking of you! Let us know how it goes. PS: words very well written!

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4 posted 2003-09-01 08:22 PM


Joyce:  I'm so sorry to hear you must undergo another sinus operation.  I know how you fe, for it is the same with me, when I have to have an anesthetic.  I always fight that helpless feeling when you lose consciousness. Please let everyone know how you do and you will be in my thoughts and prayers.

Love
Betty Lou

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cusick
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5 posted 2003-09-02 06:49 AM


It sounds rather like a nightmare and I was sharing it with you. Very good read. Maggie

Denise
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6 posted 2003-09-02 01:26 PM


It is such a disconcerting feeling, Joyce. You've expressed it perfectly. I wish you the best on Wednesday.
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