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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sometimes .... ~*Marge Tindal*~ Sometimes I awaken to watch you still sleeping a gentle smile playing across your face Inside my heart I am praying that your smiles are of me Then you stir ... reach out and touch me awakening, you murmur "I have a dream to share with you"~ Your smile tells me everything I need to know~ *For my sweetheart* August 2003 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (08-19-2003 03:23 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge, Now you've gone and touched my heart. What a gentle picture you paint. Thank you. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Larry~ Thank you ... gentle are two hearts, beating as one~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Such a lovely, tender write! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Oooh.... Im jealous. Wonderful words for a wonderful thing. "The usefulness of a cup is in its emptiness, for a cup that is full can hold no more." |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
a tender loving piece dear friend... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
How fortunate, the two of you. Love, Joyce |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
"I have a dream to share with you"~ This truly is sharing a life. I know what you mean. Thanks, Melton |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sighs, lovely moment captured marge |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Hello marge, i really missed being around here but the one thing that always drew me back was your wonderful words. once again thanks for bringing a smile to my face. hugs june x |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all for your lovely comments on this little piece~ And ... June ... GOOD to see you back~ *Huglets* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Love looks beautiful on you dear friend. I've been inside this poem and yes, it feels wonderful doesn't it? |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
I loved this poem! I also have felt this way, it is such an amazing feeling to wake up to the person you love smiling up at you. Great job |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...A tender write, enjoyed very much...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks everyone~ And Hootie ... your reply is beautiful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Marge: This is so lovely, and it makes me look forward to finding someone special as you have. Beautifully written as always! (where's the photo of your sweetheart to accompany this!!?) Connie. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
***SIGHS** Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love |
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