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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
Sometimes .... ~*Marge Tindal*~ Sometimes I awaken to watch you still sleeping a gentle smile playing across your face Inside my heart I am praying that your smiles are of me Then you stir ... reach out and touch me awakening, you murmur "I have a dream to share with you"~ Your smile tells me everything I need to know~ *For my sweetheart* August 2003 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (08-19-2003 03:23 PM).] |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge, Now you've gone and touched my heart. What a gentle picture you paint. Thank you. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Larry~ Thank you ... gentle are two hearts, beating as one~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Such a lovely, tender write! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Oooh.... Im jealous. Wonderful words for a wonderful thing. "The usefulness of a cup is in its emptiness, for a cup that is full can hold no more." |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
a tender loving piece dear friend... ![]() the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
How fortunate, the two of you. Love, Joyce |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
"I have a dream to share with you"~ This truly is sharing a life. I know what you mean. Thanks, Melton |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sighs, lovely moment captured marge |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Hello marge, i really missed being around here but the one thing that always drew me back was your wonderful words. once again thanks for bringing a smile to my face. hugs june x |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all for your lovely comments on this little piece~ ![]() And ... June ... GOOD to see you back~ *Huglets* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Love looks beautiful on you dear friend. I've been inside this poem and yes, it feels wonderful doesn't it? ![]() |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
I loved this poem! I also have felt this way, it is such an amazing feeling to wake up to the person you love smiling up at you. Great job |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...A tender write, enjoyed very much...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks everyone~ And Hootie ... your reply is beautiful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Marge: This is so lovely, and it makes me look forward to finding someone special as you have. Beautifully written as always! (where's the photo of your sweetheart to accompany this!!?) ![]() Connie. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
***SIGHS** Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love |
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